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Such it is. by ~Lividia:iconLividia:



First bike I owned was stolen
Out the back yard, life was hard
The scarred set against the scarred
Living for the day
Tomorrow's the same anyway
Learnt how to survive
My life, dodging the knife
Nearly twenty-one and I still got the strife
Sometimes I make a brew and I see proof
Of lead in the pipes
And that's the least of it
The air's thick I'm sick of it
Living in London breathing shit all the time
If I wanted black lungs I would've gone down the mine
I shrug, it's fine
It's just living
And I can only live the life that I'm given
Gotten used to shivering
Boiler's bust again
And winter's on it's way
If I don't make the rent
I'll be sleeping in a doorway
In a box of cheese and onion
Even as I write this song
I sit back and try to think where it all went wrong
But I know deep down
I can't expect more from my world
Cos my working-class mother had a working-class girl.




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Just some observations on my life so far.

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~emilis:iconemilis: Nov 30, 2005, 3:43:48 AM
That's a great poem, very vivid. It was like a story. Awesome work =D

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~evnishen:iconevnishen: Nov 30, 2005, 4:17:38 AM
you have to remember, life deals us the cards! it is our choice how we play them. and thr house dosen't always win!!
loved it!!
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~Lividia:iconLividia: Nov 30, 2005, 5:23:58 AM
I agree the house doesn't always win, but how many times does it lose against a twenty year old rebel?

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~evnishen:iconevnishen: Nov 30, 2005, 7:14:15 AM
Right after it loses to a 16 year old optimist!
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~Lividia:iconLividia: Nov 30, 2005, 8:26:41 AM
Uh-huh.

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"Your enemies are those who would assign to you an enemy. "

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=GameDreamer:iconGameDreamer: Nov 30, 2005, 2:07:56 PM
Freakin' great. Have you read "Evasion"? That poem/song reminds me of it.

:peace:

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~Anarres:iconAnarres: Nov 30, 2005, 5:45:40 PM
I like very much the last line -- it is a pity that it doesn't meld with the sonority of the previous four ones. Though, perhaps, it serves as contrast.

Anyway, good writing. I tend to find your writings rather moving. And frustrating, too, in a sense. Frustrating because there are so much things to fix, and so little time, and one feels at times so powerless to change them...

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~Lividia:iconLividia: Dec 1, 2005, 3:52:11 AM
No, I've not read it mate. Any good?

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~Lividia:iconLividia: Dec 1, 2005, 3:53:13 AM
Such it is.

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"Your enemies are those who would assign to you an enemy. "

I like chip butties and I cannot lie...

Co-admin of ~Activists
Revolution: [link]